I saw you dressed in imperfection
Slipping out of the horizon into obscurity
Like an orange Valentine cookie
That my lover took a bite from.
Slowly, slowly you rose up from the dead
And as the Kansas sky tried to swallow you
With its hungry wind and blaring stars, you
Filled the midnight with a semicircle of light.
(a waning gibbous science teachers would say)
But to me, your missing piece made you whole
As you bathed the highway with your persistence,
Your imperfect circle guiding me all the way home.
Nicely written! I liked the storyline, the format and the choice of words. I think you did a really great job.
Just lovely. I could see the moon through your eyes.
i am here from jingle’s thursday rally for poets.
wish you the very best.
trisha